Guide
Media Pitch Examples and How to Write Them
A media pitch is a short email proposing a story to a journalist, editor, or producer. A good one is specific, relevant, and makes the recipient's job easier.
A media pitch example is a concrete template for an email that proposes a story idea to a journalist, editor, or producer, and a good one is specific, relevant, and makes the recipient's job easier by connecting your expertise to their recent work.
On this page8 sections
- 01What a media pitch is and is not
- 02How to find the right journalist to pitch
- 03The structure of a working pitch
- 04Media pitch example for a product
- 05Media pitch example for an expert source
- 06What a realistic response rate looks like
- 07What to do when nobody replies
- 08The one thing to avoid at all costs
What a media pitch is and is not
A media pitch is a short, unsolicited email. Its goal is to start a conversation that could lead to a quote, an interview, or a feature. It is not a press release. A press release announces news about your company. A pitch proposes a story angle that includes your expertise or product as a component.
The distinction matters because journalists receive hundreds of press releases. They are looking for stories, not announcements. Your pitch must answer the question, 'Why would my readers care about this today?' If you cannot answer that, you are sending an announcement, not a pitch.
How to find the right journalist to pitch
Search for journalists who have recently written about your subject. Do not use a media database as your first step. Start with a search engine. If you run a cybersecurity training company, search for 'ransomware attack small business advice article' or 'phishing training feature'. Look at the bylines.
Read three of their recent articles. Note the tone, the depth, and the types of sources they quote. A journalist who writes investigative pieces needs different evidence than one who writes quick how to guides. Your goal is to understand what they consider a story.
Disqualify a target if their last article on your topic was more than six months ago, if they only cover breaking news from wire services, or if they explicitly state they do not accept pitches on their social profile or website. Pitching them anyway wastes your time and harms your sending reputation.
The structure of a working pitch
A pitch has four parts: a subject line, a personal opener, the story idea, and a call to action. Each part has a single job. The subject line's job is to be opened. The opener's job is to show you did your homework. The story idea's job is to be compelling. The call to action's job is to be easy.
Never write 'I hope this email finds you well'. It is the most common opener in cold email and signals you have not read their work. Instead, reference their work directly. 'I read your piece on supply chain delays in the Gazette last week, and it resonated because our logistics software sees the same bottleneck in textile imports.' This takes fifteen seconds and changes everything.
Media pitch example for a product
Imagine a company named Grove that makes soil sensors for home gardeners. They want coverage in gardening magazines. A bad pitch talks about Grove's new funding or features. A good pitch proposes a story. Here is the example.
Subject: Story angle: How data from cheap sensors is changing backyard tomato yields
Hi [Journalist Name], I enjoyed your article on heirloom tomato varieties in [Publication Name]. It made me think of a trend we are seeing. Gardeners using simple Bluetooth soil sensors are getting 30 percent more fruit from the same plants, not by changing seeds but by timing water and fertilizer to the exact moisture level the plant wants. I run Grove, and we supply these sensors to several community garden projects. I have the anonymized data from last season showing the yield difference, and I can connect you with two gardeners who used the system and saw the jump. Would a short call or some data points be useful for a future piece on tech in the garden? Best, [Your Name]
This works because it names a specific benefit, offers proof, and provides sources. It ties directly to the journalist's known interest.
Media pitch example for an expert source
You are not selling a product. You are a financial planner who wants to be quoted on retirement planning. Your pitch is about your availability and your niche angle.
Subject: Source on 401k withdrawals for freelancers, following your piece on gig economy savings
Hi [Journalist Name], Your article on gig economy savings strategies highlighted a gap: what happens when those freelancers retire and their 401k is a patchwork of old accounts? I am a CFP who specializes in exactly this. I help freelance designers and writers create withdrawal strategies that account for irregular income and the absence of a corporate plan administrator. I have a simple three step framework that could work as a sidebar or checklist. I am available for a quote or a brief interview this week if you are working on a follow up. Sincerely, [Your Name]
This works because it identifies a logical next story based on their previous work and positions you as the specialist for that narrow topic.
What a realistic response rate looks like
If you send one hundred well researched, personalized pitches to correctly identified journalists, you might get between five and fifteen responses. Of those, perhaps two to five will lead to a conversation. One might become a piece. This is not a failure. It is the baseline. Media relations is a numbers game played with precision.
The rate changes with your niche. A trade publication in a specialized field may have a higher response rate because they need expert sources. A national newspaper will have a lower rate because the competition is fierce. Track your own numbers. If you get zero responses from fifty pitches, the problem is likely your target list or your opener, not your idea.
What to do when nobody replies
First, wait seven business days. Do not send a follow up after two days. Journalists work on longer timelines. After seven days, you can send one follow up email. Make it lighter. 'Just circling back on my note below about soil sensor data. Happy to share those anonymized charts if useful.' If no reply to that, move on. Do not follow up again.
If you consistently get no replies, audit your process. Are you pitching the right person? Is your subject line clear? Are you leading with a story or with yourself? Show your pitch to someone outside your company and ask, 'Would you forward this to a busy editor?' Their honest answer is your answer.
This process of finding targets, reading their work, and drafting a personalized pitch is repetitive but necessary. A tool like Mentionry automates the finding and drafting steps. You give it a domain, and it finds journalists who have covered your competitors or your topic, then drafts a personalized pitch into your own connected mailbox for you to review and send. It does not place the story, but it handles the research and the first draft.
The one thing to avoid at all costs
Do not lie. Do not exaggerate your data. Do not claim an exclusive you cannot give. Do not say you are a fan of their work if you have not read it. Journalism is built on verification. If you are caught in even a small lie, your name and your company's name will be remembered for the wrong reasons. Be honest about what you know and what you can provide. That is how you build a reputation as a reliable source, which is more valuable than any single article.
Questions people actually ask
A media pitch should be short enough to read in thirty seconds. That is typically between one hundred and two hundred words. The subject line should be under ten words. Busy journalists will not scroll. Put the most compelling reason for them to care in the first two sentences. If you need more space, attach a one page brief or put the details lower down, but assume they will only read the first paragraph.